I got torn the fuck apart in my edits from my instructor on the draft I sent in prior to the final (justifiably so, really). Eight hours ago I finished my edits, and frankly, a bit of a re-write. Take a look, I think it works better now.

Not For Long

What do you think? Do you agree? Do you love it? Or am i a complete tool? Any response is welcome!

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