The prompt, assigned from NaPoWriMo.net, is from the Bibliomancy Oracle.

Not knowing any better
is all primitive means.

So here is my submission:

Not knowing any better
is all but primitive means,
the floor houses her sweater
And my tongue tastes her screams.

We lay in the moonlight
And talk for most of the night.
She asks me where I have been
And my thoughts escape me when
She pulls in a little closer
And whispers, a little more sure,
the words over again
like it changed by then.

“I don’t know where I was
But it took me forever to get here.
I hope that’s fine, because
You are all and everything I want, dear.”

 

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