My Requiem for  a dream shot.

My Requiem for a dream shot.



In the seconds before blinking there is a remorse –

A sense of approaching loss –

In the knowledge life will never be as it was

In this sequence of moments we stand in.


Sometimes I try to hold it;

to keep my eyes open as long as possible –

So I can relish in a moment

that will never be once more.

The air stings. With each second it grows stronger –

The pain amplifies –

Bringing a painful sadness to the

sweet solace I yearn to endure.



There is no redemption. Only a guilt.

A guilt that I left the salvation I sought

for so long

to know that it was gone.

That I may not belong.

That I may be wrong.


But we carry on.


Welcome to the empty recesses of my mind! I'm a recent college graduate realizing a Creative Writing degree was a bad idea. Give me a pity like. Or you could check out the about sections (on the front page and about this author page) on my blog to learn a little more about me. Whatever.

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