thoughts on grieving7

Thoughts on Grieving


The bland sunset streaks over the sky

I look at your picture and I Lie

To everyone and their questions

The constant stream; It never ends.


But still I watch the sun, it never loses

Shape. Moving after a life undone

Is the hardest pain to take.


I go to the store

And you’re not there,

I go to the grave –

This life isn’t fair.


The air smells sweet

As we sit and watch the sun.

I could lie here all day,

My life is undone.




Welcome to the empty recesses of my mind! I'm a recent college graduate realizing a Creative Writing degree was a bad idea. Give me a pity like. Or you could check out the about sections (on the front page and about this author page) on my blog to learn a little more about me. Whatever.

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